The animation is uncanny. If this were horror related, this strange style of animation might work in your favor.

This would look much nicer with more frames, as I'm afraid a few have already noted.

Superb jumpcut

The first level was fine, but I had trouble after that. With the second level, the precision had to be precise when attempting to collect the first few "gems" after going up the first hill. In other words, some tweaking via object placement, could be a sound idea (same goes for a few miscellaneous jumps from one object to another. Aesthetically, I could understand going for a retro approach, but in the case of text, I suggest it be much more visible for people to see.

FUS ROH...F**** (Premature blow) I mean Dah? *Lydia runs off laughing... *I cry D:*

You superbly pulled off the use of percussion near the end of this one.

Might want to put this in Ambient, in regards to genre. The tune isn't too distracting and in the case of it being for a visual novel, that's a good thing.

I'll have you know I call it fork knife too

I have always enjoyed Giygas, and the whole "you cannot fathom Giygas" thing, but I really did realize the potential for Rule 34, when it comes to Giygas. Well played!

The picture is great, but try changing the rating to E. Kissing isn't going to get you in any trouble.

I love this too much