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The mixture of sound and visuals was sublime, and both characterized the title. In my case, the video struck a nerve (in a good way).

While it would look great in its final version, what I see here is a work in progress due to the the choppy framerate/"mechanical movement," I suppose sound could be added later, but that's a critique for another day and isn't the matter at hand. However, the attempt you made for human emotion gets 5 stars, since the facial changes are spot on (other than for the previous grief I had).

Anyways, it's a good start and I look forward to watching what else you provide.

I love how the music is synced up with the animation, it makes all the aspects of what made this. The sound and animation are working together to provide more depth for the story (if that makes any sense).

Nothing overly complex for a build-up, but rather short and sweet. I like it a lot for the use of no dialogue to and slapstick done in such a short (but crisply) animated video.

I think sound effects might enhance the viewing experience

I like the concept, but the choppy animation, sound, and voice acting could be improved.

Something else you might want to consider, is beefing up the description. If someone (like me), sees this first, before any of the other videos in the series, said person might be confused as to what's going on.

My only question is: Is the whole thing animated? And if not, then next time, it would be cool if you drew everything, including an image of facebook, and the posts. (Then again that's more of an opinion thing)
Really, the only thing that might make the animation jump at folks, is if you try animating the movement, so that it doesn't look like any of your images are just being slid around.

Lastly, I'm sure you will improve over time, and make even better stuff, animation wise.... I thought the fact that snoop liked it, was pretty funny (got a chuckle from me :D)

Dovji responds:

hey,
I'm not sure what you meant by "whole thing animated", but most of the stuff you saw in the animation is custom made. If you pause, you can read/notice some juice details ;)

A little hokey on the humor and acting, but that's okay. The end credits music was appropriate and and the animation didn't look too choppy. You get a thumbs up.

nawktoons responds:

Thank you! I tried my best! :D

There's good animation, and the concept is decent, but the sound quality could be improved. Would be a lot better if the yelling sounded less muffled.

This is the sorta thing that hits me (emotionally) in the right spot, the progression of it, and the outcome were perfect, and the style of animation was just right. Well done, and an excellent job.

I enjoy playing around with sound; (Picture at the top was done by a friend of a friend, I'm the peep to the left)

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